FICTION

Me First

illus. by Max Kornell. 32p. Penguin/Nancy Paulsen. May 2014. Tr $16.99. ISBN 9780399159978. LC 2013024242.
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K-Gr 2—Hal and his younger sister Martha are constantly trying to outdo each other. They squabble over who will be the first to pack their bags for a picnic, jump in the river, and build the highest rock tower. But the siblings change their ways after taking a new path home filled with many unpleasant "firsts " that force them to help each other rather than compete. Set in the countryside with rolling green hills and brown cottages, the donkey characters dress in human clothing. The old-fashioned illustrations are appropriate for this fable-like tale. It takes place over the course of a single day, and the artwork helps readers transition from the sunny summer morning to the shady twilight of evening. The full-page paintings alternate with smaller ones set against ample white space providing visual variety. The composition and line work of the acrylic ink is excellent, and the straightforward text is a combination of narrative and dialogue with the occasional use of speech bubbles that serves the sequential story well. The large trim size, boldly outlined illustrations, and easily readable text make this a good choice for group sharing. This story of sibling rivalry will have broad appeal, especially for parents looking to emphasize the importance of teamwork.—Amy Seto Musser, Denver Public Library
Martha and Hal are ultracompetitive (donkey) siblings. On the way home from a family picnic, one misadventure after another helps the two grow to appreciate each other and realize that a little cooperation goes a long way. Kornell's acrylic ink drawings burst with color. The messages here about sibling rivalry come minus any heavy-handedness.
Martha and Hal are ultracompetitive siblings. Martha isn't bothered that Hal is older: "It made beating him more fun." These two can turn anything into a competition, whether it's racing to Gopher's Rock, packing their bags for an outing, or seeing who can stack stones the highest. After a family trip to the river for a picnic -- during which time Hal and Martha find "exciting ways to try to outdo each other" -- they get permission to go home a different way. One misadventure after another on the walk back help the siblings grow to appreciate each other and realize that a little cooperation goes a long way. Kornell's acrylic ink drawings burst with color. Martha, Hal, and their parents are depicted as very expressive donkeys; William Steig's Sylvester and his folks are a good comparison. The messages here about sibling rivalry come minus any heavy-handedness. sam bloom

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